Doesn't fit my skin but fits me,
When they hear my name most think of me.
Given a little flavor with the added Y,
Added that it's already rare you get one unique guy.
Gods gracious is what it stands for,
Other meanings I'm sure there's plenty more.
But that particular one I claim,
It brings happiness and positiveness to my name.
I have a nickname like everyone should,
It started in 4th grade with sugg.
On the basketball court is where I heard it,
"Go get em sugg" is what my coach blurted.
Ever since then it has been part of my quota,
Now everyone calls me Shayne, Sugg, or Suga.
Since my family is mostly short,
It's amazing that small Shayne grew to be six foot sugg and a beast on the court.
It's like me candy on holloween I'd never share it,
Like a first love you can never replace it.
The way my name rolls off the tongue has something perfect abou it,
It makes me who I am I would be nothing without it.
From the slithering S to the perfectly curled Y,
It brings warmth to my soul like the burning sun in the blue ski.
No matter what my name is my name,
Nothing will change I will forever be Sugashayne.
Great rhyme scheme! I didn't get bored reading it because the beat led me to continue reading.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the fact that you rhymed the whole thing.
ReplyDeleteI like how you rhymed throughout your poem and your wording was well thought out.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said it brings positivity to your name and happiness
ReplyDeleteI like how you show pride in your name.
ReplyDeleteI never knew were you got your nickname from and now I know, good job on the poem
ReplyDeleteOkay Shayne I mean I know other shaynes but okay. I like your simile and how you take ownership in your name
ReplyDeleteI like the rhyming and how you described how you got your nicknames.
ReplyDeleteYou spelled sky wrong, but I like you simile.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you went into great detail about you getting your nickname "sugg".
ReplyDeleteI like the last the last two lines "no matter what my name is my name, nothing will ever change I will forever be sugashayne."
ReplyDeleteThe spelling of your name is unique. I like that in the beginning, you said whenever most people hear the name, they think of you.
ReplyDeleteShayne,
ReplyDeleteAwesome job! I like how you state your name is like your candy on halloween and when I asked you for a piece of candy today, you didn't share.
"Positiveness" would probably sound better as "positivity." I like your rhyme scheme. I also quite like how you compared your name to candy on Halloween.
ReplyDeleteI liked your rhyme scheme, the poem flows very smoothly.
ReplyDeleteSixth line from the bottom add a t to abou. Ninth line from the bottom I liked how you showed the progression from short Shayne to tall Sugg.
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